English 9th
"Where magic happens"
Monday, November 29, 2010
Poe's Death
Poe. He was so young when he died, his death, was terrible. He was a special man, ever since he was a kid. He was different then everybody else. His parents weren't the world's greatest parents. As he grew up, he turned into an alchoholic. Everyone will probabably for a high chance drink atleast sometime in their life. Poe was a completely different story, he was a big alchoholic that staied drunk more often then sober in his life. To other people, he was slightly mad due to his drinkings. No one wants to get associated with a drunk, and Poe drank so much that being drunk was probably his permanent state. He was sent for treatment to try help cutting down his often drinkings and his crazy mindset. It was hard for a man like Poe to stay sober rather than drunk. He had his own mind problems even though he was sober, his families came by to attempt to help him get through this tough time of his life. Poe was crazy, everyone thought. Everyone thought he would be less of a mad man after ending his drinking. Everyone guessed wrong, he was crazy drunk or sober. I think he died due to his need for alchohol, along with his own crazy mind and his often drinkings. His drinkings was hurting his body, the alchohol level in his blood was off the chart. His crazy mind told himself many things people dont normally tell themselves. This was a tragic death for his family and Poe.
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ReplyDeleteI think you need to be careful here and sick to the facts that you know. There are a lot of generalizations here that are not based on fact.
Ex. Everyone thought he would be less of a mad man after ending his drinking. Everyone guessed wrong, he was crazy drunk or sober. (Really? It's pretty hard to write when you're not focused)